First attempt at this style — be kind from this weekend

Rapid Noodle · 8 likes

Really good advice, and it feels doable. I noticed the same thing in Toronto

Marco Conti · 2 likes

amazing how much difference one small change can make. Honestly, the simplest version wins for me

Urban Sparrow · 1 likes

This comment has main-character footnote energy

Miguel Santos · 1 likes

I think both things can be true

Camila Rocha · 1 likes

The framing feels off to me. Not terrible just not convincing. A little friction removed goes a long way. The texture and mood are lovely

Paper Coder · 2 likes

my wallet felt that

Sleepy Comet · 1 likes

Kind of wild how often lovely is the whole issue

Ananya Rao · 1 likes

I had teh same reaction to terrible

Aarav Sharma · 0 likes

I had the same reaction to removed

Mango Panda · 1 likes

I am saving this for the next time I overthink style. The Warsaw example makes it feel concrete

Chloe Davis · 1 likes

the framing feels off to me. Not terrible just not convincing. That is where the boring checklist helps. Process photos would be fun to see

Midnight Panda · 0 likes

Glad you shared it; small wins count. I would write it down before changing anything else. Great use of light and restraint

Jan Nowak · 0 likes

This made me smile more than expected

Kabir Khan · 0 likes

I love this. It feels practical without pretending life is neat. That is the kind of detail beginners miss